Forum posts by Ji-Sung

I've been going at lips for almost 2 weeks now.

I must say the teeth and the inside of the mouth are one of the hardest to draw. I'd appreciate feedback on what i got wrong and how to make it better.

Empty0000

I agree with your critique and thank you for pointing them out

Two questions

1. You said the length of 5 eyes and also the length of 1 eyes. I am confused, which is it?

2. yes eyes 1 and 12 have a bland expression which is the same as the reference. Is this what you mean by "unfocused, powerless, and have no vitality"?

Draulallot

I am still trying to get a hang of the basics and overall structure. I'll definitely work on variations. Thanks

Janhackstrom

Yes I can see that now.

Thestripper

Thanks. Can't be stressing out the critiques lol

Polyvios Animations

Oh okay. You are right, I was still getting the hang of it and I definitely need to work on variation. Thanks you

Polyvios Animations, When you say bland do you mean the nose drawings you mentioned look the same?

Thank you Polyvios for the feedback. I'll work on your suggestions.

Eshlost, thanks for the critique and I've been following Angel's tutorials, I didn't know his tutorials were stylised and simplified. While I'm not interested in realism I don't mind using it as a resource to improve and draw better. I'm currently looking at Poko and David finch's youtube tutorials.

I am learning how to draw eyes and i have to say the 3/4 and the eyes half closed view is one of my most difficult to draw. I would love to get some critique on my progress so far.

Thank you so much. Appreciate your feedback

Gordon

Yes. I tried imagining what the hand images would look like from a different perspective and then drawing said perspective. Really difficult but i know I'll get there.

Thank you vvalverde

Yes I didn't use the basic shapes here. I have been having a hard time getting accurate measurements for the proportions using shapes, especially in poses where the fingers were bent or in foreshortened poses. Correct me if I'm wrong but isn't there supposed to be a point where the artist can draw hands correctly without going through the tedious process of drawing these shapes first?

https://www.deviantart.com/ji-sung/art/PicsArt-06-25-07-29-51-803195856

https://www.deviantart.com/ji-sung/art/PicsArt-06-25-07-44-10-803195833

https://www.deviantart.com/ji-sung/art/PicsArt-06-25-07-47-11-803195815

https://www.deviantart.com/ji-sung/art/PicsArt-06-25-08-09-54-803195708

https://www.deviantart.com/ji-sung/art/PicsArt-06-25-07-54-15-803195802.

https://www.deviantart.com/ji-sung/art/PicsArt-06-25-08-06-41-803195749

https://www.deviantart.com/ji-sung/art/PicsArt-06-25-08-31-09-803195663

• Ji-Sung edited this post on June 25, 2019 9:21pm. Reason: Added image link